My New Favorite Writing Book …

dmaassI recently picked up the book, THE FIRE IN FICTION, written by long time agent, Donald Maass.  This is a follow-up book to his best-selling book and workbook, HOW TO WRITE THE BREAKOUT NOVEL.

What I really enjoyed about the book is the focus on the small things, the nuances of character and plot that can take a book from good to great.   He talks a lot about character, the protagonist, the hero, the villain.  At the end of each chapter are some thoughtful questions that you can ask yourself about your own work.  I found the questions provocative and made me rethink some of my decisions.  One of his practical tools worksheet suggests that the writer pick a scene, identify its outer turning point, the exact minute when things change for the protagonist or the point of view character.  Then he suggests winding the clock back ten minutes, and write a paragraph as to how the point of view character sees herself before that turning point.  Then wind the clock ahead ten minutes and think about how the character feels now.  These kinds of exercises really break down the writing to small details and allow the writer to really craft the story instead of just coasting along and occasionally getting lucky with some great scenes.

He talks a lot about having the passion for the story, which I also think is so important.  You can always tell when the writer really believes in the world he/she is creating and those that are just going through the motions.

Maass’s other book is also really good – I must say he analyzes some passages from my novel, SUMMER SECRETS, in his book, HOW TO WRITE A BREAKOUT NOVEL, and I really enjoyed his analysis.

So if you’re looking for a good writing book, I highly recommend this one.

Deb Stover’s The Gift …

I had a chance to talk to Deb Stover recently about her new book, THE GIFT, which is in bookstores now!

Barbara:  Tell us about your new book — I love the cover by the way, very spooky and intriguing.thegiftstover

Deb: In my book, THE GIFT, the Dearborn family are born with some variance of an empathic gift.  Beth’s “gift” manifests in a particularly frightening manner by enabling her to experience the final moments of those who’ve died violently. As an adult, she chooses a career as a homicide detective, and–obviously–is very successful. However, the experience of being ”murdered” repeatedly takes a terrible toll and she turns to alcohol for solace. When she hits bottom and seeks treatment for her addiction, she is convinced the only way she can stay sober is to somehow suppress her gift-turned-curse by avoiding places where the spirit of someone who died violently might contact her. She leaves her position and takes one as a nomadic insurance investigator. Her new career keeps her safe and sober for three years. Convinced her gift has faded from lack of use, she finally accepts an assignment involving possible life insurance fraud, which leads her to a small town in eastern Tennessee.

Ty Malone’s wife, Lorilee, disappeared over seven years ago. Though the town and his father-in-law remain convinced she ran away to pursue a career as a painter in Europe, he has always maintained that the only thing that could keep his wife away from her children is death. It’s time to learn the truth, so he petitions the court to have her declared legally dead. The life insurance claim brings investigator Beth Dearborn into his life.

THE GIFT is part mystery, part ghost story, part suspense, part romance, part thriller. The novel also touches on the issue of women and alcoholism on various levels. Beth is a recovering alcoholic, and the reader will also meet a character who is a practicing one. Both Beth and Ty will be forced to face their greatest fears to learn the truth, and to find happiness.

Barbara:  What pulled you into the story and made you think ‘I have to write this’?

Deb: A protagonist always pulls me into a new story. In this case, I “met” Ty’s wife, Lorilee, first. She introduced herself to my muse, and I wrote a scene that appears very late in the book (it would be a spoiler if I told you about it) as a prologue initially. Then I saved it and used it later. From that scene, the entire story evolved. She is the catalyst who brings about all the events.

Barbara: When did you first begin writing?

Deb:  I think I was about eight. My first publication was a letter to the editor of the WICHITA EAGLE at age eleven. I majored in Journalism, thendebstover2009worked for a newspaper. I wrote my first romance manuscript in 1984. It was a monster of almost 200,000 words. I still need to burn it…. I dabbled for a few more years, then joined RWA and got serious in 1991. I sold my first book in December 1993. SHADES OF ROSE was published by Kensington in 1995.

Barbara:  What is your writing process and where do you write?

Deb:  I prefer to write at my desk, mostly for comfort. Since I have rheumatoid arthritis, ergonomics are extra important. I have a special keyboard, keyboard tray, chair, mouse, etc. I love my laptop, but if I spend too much time on it, I pay the price. I’m typically a very early morning writer—and often wake hours before dawn to work while the rest of the house is sleeping soundly. I love quiet, and rarely listen to music while working–especially in first draft. While editing, I can listen to anything, but in first draft I can’t have any lyrics. They pull me out of the story.

I’m very much a “pantser”–and I have to say I hate that term. I much prefer Jo Beverley’s “writing into the mist” description. I start with a character in a situation, then start writing. Once I have a global idea of the general plot and the cast of characters, I write a narrative synopsis and send it to my agent. Once we go to contract, do any revisions to the proposal, if requested, I plunge ahead. I confess my finished product does not always follow that synopsis verbatim. And I NEVER outline. Perish the thought….

Barbara: What is your favorite thing about writing? What is your least favorite thing?

Deb:  My favorite thing is that it’s my favorite thing. Okay, seriously, I love being able to work in my pajamas. I stagger out of bed in the morning, get my fuzzy slippers and robe, my mug of strong coffee, and plop myself in front of the computer with an adoring dog at my side. Much better than dressing up and fighting traffic on the freeway.  My least favorite thing would have to be worrying about the business side of this, and promotion. In a perfect world, writers could just write and not have to worry about numbers and promo and covers and… ::sigh:

Barbara:  What is your advice to aspiring writers?

Deb:  It’s your book. Trust your instincts. There are no rules. Critique is a smorgasbord–take what you want and leave what you don’t. There are a thousand how-to books, workshops, and know-it-alls out there dying to tell you how to do your job. There is no special handshake. There is no secret potion. There is no magic elixir. You only have yourself, your muse, and the blank screen/Big Chief Tablet/whatever medium you choose. Keep throwing the spaghetti against the wall until something sticks.

Barbara:  What is next for you?

Deb: I am currently at work on the sequel to THE GIFT–working title is THE SECRET. When you read THE GIFT, you will meet Beth’s cousin, Sam Dearborn. His “gift” manifests in a different way. He jokingly refers to himself as a ”psychic errand boy.”

THANKS DEB for sharing your new book with us — I can’t wait to read it!  If anyone has any questions for Deb, feel free to ask away.

New Cover – On Shadow Beach

Here is my new cover for the next book in my Angel’s Bay Series.  ON SHADOW BEACH will be in stores April 2010.  And I’m thrilled to say that book On Shadow Beach_NOT_FINALthree, IN SHELTER COVE,  will be arriving the following month, May 2010.   So no waiting in between stories – yay!

On Shadow Beach features a new central story line  … here’s a blurb from the back cover:

Lauren Jamison hasn’t been back to Angel’s Bay since she was a teenager … when her sister Abby was murdered and Lauren’s boyfriend, Shane Murray, was accused of the crime.  When Lauren reluctantly returns home to assist her ailing father, the old attraction flares between Lauren and Shane.  But the terrible days after Abby’s murder still stand between them as well as the secrets Shane has yet to unveil.  Finding the truth could bring closure … but at a cost.

Also featured in the story are continuing characters and secondary story lines … Kara is desperate for her husband Colin to awaken from the coma that resulted from a shooting… Charlotte finds herself in the middle of a growing love triangle between Joe and Andrew and rumors about the unnamed father of Annie’s baby continue to swirl.

You won’t want to miss the second installment in Angel’s Bay …

So tell me  - what do you think of the look?

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